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The Case of the Quiet Participant

One case from a proposed 7–8 strip series. Detective-noir parody in the Tracer Bullet / Dixon Hill register — the voiceover plays it completely straight while the actual stakes are small, domestic, and administrative. Boxes are art placeholders; judge the copy and the tonal system.

Source: comic-quiet-participant.md

The Quiet Participant

6 panels · 3 across × 2 down · LEAD: TRACY GRANT · the tonal break lands on the row break

Row 1 — the old case (flashback · full noir · double frame)

1 TWO YEARS BACK
It was the DRIFT trial. My first one as PI.
Sixty subjects. Twelve weeks. And a quiet you only get in a conference room where somebody has just read the entire consent form out loud. All eleven pages. Including the optional saliva sample.
2
Somebody clammed up. I didn't know until closeout when I pulled the export. An empty column of data. Six weeks.
The column stared at me and I stared right back, like a raccoon stares at a motion-sensor porch light.
3
Six weeks of silence, and I'd been sitting on it the whole time.
Sure, you can write it up. Put it in the report. Hand it to the IRB with a straight face and a fresh haircut. What you can't do is get it back.

Row 2 — tonight (hinge, then the product · single frame)

4 TONIGHT
⚠  031 — no response in 3 days
This time was different. This time I had a canary.
Three days in, it sang. Somebody was watching the joint, and it wasn't the night janitor.
5
Hey — haven't heard from you. Everything okay?
Her mother was in the hospital. She needed a week. We paused her, and she finished the study.
6
Three days is a phone call. Six weeks is a limitations section.
The coffee was cold. Cold as Reviewer 2.

I guess there's some things software just can't fix.

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